Indian_Rake
Why I think you should Rewrite: I don't mean to downgrade the story but you made sex part too overpowered maybe not just that but everything about MC is overwhelming his character(assumed through unbearable dialogues), his love life, his power, etc. maybe you read too many Indian lust stories, the old ones with gods having thousands of women. Most Importantly, web novel is best written as Zero to Hero not other way around.
Itâs a good book. Simple yet exhilarating but I do sense a lot of loose ends.. Like there are too many mysteries which would require an arc to be understandable to us. So I do understand when u say there is lot on cards. Ig u could rewrite this one by simplygying it a bit...You could also continue this one if you like but then u have to wrap up many parts in a simple fashion.
I think you should do what you want. This was good but I can see that some areas of the story were outside of your comfort zone. If you write another story you could consider writing a fanfic so you have less to think about and really just focus on the characters and relationships. This was really fun to read and for a first novel(?) this is quite good.