Comments of chapter undefined of The Tyrant Gentle Husband

Reading this is excruciating... The word flow is bad, the grammar is bad, the consistency is bad.... but the story is intriguing so I will try a bit more...

Dear author, you have an interesting storyline, but I must admit that it is getting harder to read as I go through the chapters. Maybe you could consider some of the previous offers to help you edit your precious work. Sorry if that sounds rude but it's just a suggestion. I will try to read a few more chapters but honestly it does get a bit confusing because of the grammar. Otherwise, it's great that you are able to come up with a story, keep it up.

The book is interesting but the translation is confusing and confounding.[img=faceslap]

It was emotional 🥺

my head is aching in understanding the story🤣🤣🤣🤣

weird.

Pls it needs editing. Buh it's interesting

if when he wakes up he divorces her immediately why was she killed or did she just die of natural causes and the original novel

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I'm so lost ...Jumping for one idea to another...Giving me headache 😫 I'll try alater maybe the next chapter has a better flow.(fingers crossed)

I really want to read this novel but i just cant feel it because of the grammar..really hope the author will accept the help of any editor because the story is kind of interesting..

maybe I missed something but why is she suddenly in love with him?

Having headache reading this story Sorry had to drop this before i get migraine

thank you for the chapters.,

such a confusing chapter

need editing but interesting!

It is confusing A novel inside a novel?

She just transmitted into the novel right?then why is feeling and talking like she loved him?

she is amazing.so gentle, kind and perfect.wish I could be like her.