Comments of chapter undefined of Immortal Path to Heaven

Mistake there, "military saber" turned into "sharp military badge"

Old man this old man that, kids these days have no respect for their elders.

First! This novel needs a good editor!

Slept for a long time... Woke up 2 hours later....

Normally people's who are after MC don't live long 😈😅

Good so far

Story is good but diffenitly need to get an editor

Yes this book could use a good editor. Is a good read. Most of the missing words I can fill in, not all of them. This book did grab my attention very quickly ! Thank you

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Thanks

great job

Nice day

when you have masters all the concepts of the metals that you are working with and you know to what degree a simple turn of the wrist using a forge hammer will accomplish, this is what it means to be a Smith.I don't like the idea of someone simply touching something and with the simple snap of your fingers you have a fully restored item to degree that is better than before. where is the hard work, how are you learning anything , where is the understanding, how can one feel any sort of accomplishment like this

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Gud chpt

Thx

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