Comments of chapter undefined of Bound to Evil

This chapter perspective is much better than the last one or is just me??

I like that we have a first perspective too, but, as you deduced, for scenes outside of the main a action, a third person perspective is better, like a the end of last chapter, it would've been better to see in third person with him mumbling to make the reader know his thoughts

I agree with you

smooth story, thanx for the chap Chief

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