Comments of chapter undefined of The Mysterious Black Magician

Nooo i need more!!! Must see her reaction to the MC showing up!!!!

Whait how come She isent known as she and is called he even bu the family makes no sense to me

Ty for the chapter. “The other one has spiky … “. This sentence should be in the past tense. Furthermore, if you want to use “the other one”, you first have to use “one”. So this sentence should be : “One had spiky short garnet hair, while the other one (the second one is not mandatory) had …” “wanted him to join the competition with the exchange …” If I have well understood, she participates because her father will give her the Newtendo. If that’s what you want to say, it is not “with the exchange” but “in exchange”. “In any case, she (instead of he) needed money …” “and to see (no if) which (no of the) family (you can use families but it is a bit weird to use it with the superlative most) had the most promising magicians.” “… it also affects their (instead of its, there are many families) ranking …”. “Especially that it came from the Encantasia Empire”. What does “that” refer to? If you talk about the citizens, it should be “Especially those who came from …”.

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Thanks for the chapter!

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