Fhrutz_D_Hollow
Okay enough for me , i tried because the story seem interesting & the writting was good but i can't go on . The MC is Pathetic & dumb (cf : can i attack more than one monster when i can barely hit one?) , the system is the same , annoying AI . Plus i feel humiliation will continue for a long time for the mc , shame i liked the world building
damn man, dudes vengeance and personality is retarded,, ,author bru,ur story is really cool BUT this MC is disgusting and repulsive, like if he got vengeance against that cunt that pushed him I would;ve been fine, but seeing what happened, its retarded...I am out,,,GL to u though, but this is a trash MC **: a request if you will, if u can, maybe re-write with a better MC,,,,again, no order, just a suggestion, cause I did enjoy this book [somewhat] BUT this fucking MC AND his ****ty personality made me quit...so yah,,if yah re-write do tell,,,hell I'll even suggest some ideas[ thought they might be ****, I'll still suggest]
The last three or 4 chapter really confusing me like, is the mc so retarded that he will argo multiple enemies even tho he deal only deal one hit point and damn his personality is sh*t. Like what the point of this. First where the cliff come from, second why he trying to humiliate himself knowing he can’t do sh*t. Third I can guess that he will fall and bla and bla found ancient treasures or class change or whatever but there is no reason to fight. Sure I can understand that there is a monster wave that overwhelmed the group and he fell or the bully push him off while nobody looking. I can understand all that but this I don’t, it unreasonable and stupid.
pathetic, she needs replaced or to face the real world mc is already bending over to apologise to others half the time and if she's going to be some spoiled brat that doesn't know the harsh reality of the world and will force him to be some idiot from a world of sun and rainbows im done. like theirs nothing good about that, I tried child of light and that was ugh, either way I hope that she quickly realises the cruel reality of the world since him being hit in the back with a fireball shouldve been enough of a wake up call for her. Well either way I hope he sticks to his no shit style but also improves upon that by not bowing all the time to apologise. also that girls a perv