Comments of chapter undefined of The Mysterious Black Magician

i assume the mc is mentally disabled or suicidal to leave the deity elsewhere while going to a dangerous area.

Why the hell this novel rate 4.6? It’s so bad!! I can’t read anymore!!

So far im liking the story a few problems here and there but ill wait to criticize in case it gets better. I just dont like how people are say that the mc is spineless its already been made clear that the mc is weak so to be fair fighting back is just stupid, I can respect an mc that can endure his onslaught of bullying it shows that he is strong willed. My final point is people who are bullied tend to have low self esteem, All he really has is his sister and their caretaker of course is main focus is on them. Give the mc time to get out of his shell. Thats all have a great day 😌

Wait Does he not have his system On him ????

okay next

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The story isn’t bad and shows some promise, but it has some pacing issues as well as with decisions what to put in and what to skip. We were told there will be an examination, but first we get a lore dump and now a 3 day ride. The receiving and upgrade of the deity is skipped while the voice of her discussed at length ….

A new reader here, recommended by my friend. An interesting story. Well done author! Is there another way that I can talk about the story with you??? like discord or fb. THANKS

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Chapter 10 and he's still a wimp just looking at girls. oh lord, we'll see how long I last.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Thanks for the chapter

I hope this won't focus too much on another world isn't his main world supposed to be important. either way I just want him to start getting revenge soon

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i feel the info dump was too big & too fast.