Comments of chapter undefined of Your faithful poisonous consort

Please punctuation, you cannot begin to understand how hard this is to read for readers, especially with a bunch of Chinese names. It would also be great to use husband, uncle, brother etc once the characters are introduced. You're writing this for a western audience, we don't keep using first and last names all the time

The story has potential

Best get an editor.

Interesting way to start off a book. I hope it stays interesting.

It could be easier to understand but is not the worst I've read. I usually automatically fix the mistakes in my mind anyways please keep the story going and don't go into hiatus.

Thanks, I'm waiting for updae