HopelesslyRomantic
Auuuthor....come baaaaack....in all seriousness you need more confidence in your self. So far the book is going in a good direction. It just needs a little polish here and there with the plot jumps and you are all set...right your self an outline of each arc and remember that side stories can be their own chapters and not necessarily have to deal with the main plot. I hope you can keep righting this one. I've read monster duchess and love this particular type of story. Come back soon