LamenThief
if i were to give a suggestion. then it would that you should focus on a small group of true wives so to speak, then some Lovers and eventually some Maids/Soldiers as a way to put his sexual conquests into position of how much char development is to be used, (and of course the revenge cases like olivia and scarlet can be put into a Floating bracket of Yet to be placed in position so thats up to you how much you you want to develop them. (or even more ranks for his harem all up to you however i would make a small group his main wives/queens alongside the sisters and the remainder his lovers/maids/soldiers/spys whatever (queens/sisters/lovers can gain his love unconditionaly but the remainder has to earn theyr happines.
gracias por tu trabajo, es muy bueno. como una sugerencia, deberías mantener el numero de esposas tal como está, o al menos dar el título de esposas a solo las presentes y para el resto el de amantes, para que no se abandone a las principales y no te centres mucho en las mujeres que tienen poca relevancia
I was expecting a lot more chapters. Not sure what kept you releasing, but if you did have the intention of making this your job, this schedule will not cut it. Also, Olivia's stubborn hatred is too forced. It's showing you are just trying to push something in the name of 'development', but this is not it. You have to give more depth to the characters from the start, in this case, it's just brakes immersion since, the pure hatred you showcase is totally uncalled for, and in earlier chapters she already started to reflect. And from Luciens and Lust's characers, Olivia would be long dead and they would not waste time on a resource that doesn't provide that much return. Anyways, I guess this pushed hatred ends in the second part. If not, then you have to provide some more depth to the reason, and why is she still kept alive.