John_Doever
Thanks for the chapter. Somehow you keep making this better and better, maybe you should share youre talent with the rest of the authors on here, i guess not because that would only diminish the quality of this series, which i am almost certain none of us want. What does that being mean when it said they were one Will li evetually turn into /gain equal strength to that being
I both love and hate this chapter. Love all the emotions and philosophy you put into this chapter, hate that Li isn’t as top dog (dog=god?) anymore. It feels like when authors take light isekai stories and add some “prophesy” to it. Sure the story feels deeper, but it’s at the cost of making the mc feel insignificant in the grand scheme of things. It’s no longer their choice, since they were “waiting for him” and the prophecy “said so”. It feels more or less like you made the mc go from the player to a pawn. A King/Queen, but a pawn neverless. All their actions, thoughts, feelings, etc. were predetermined and predictable. Not a dealbreaker, it’s just something I’ve noticed.
this is the very first chapter in the novel that I don't like at all. for me this was to much... i like more the idea of a accient being aka god but now he is something more bigger so I feel that li is now least important and don't like it to much. hell o feel his religión is worthless now.. i don't feel the True power of Eternal Garden when I write the name now ( i know that is not the original name but the church doesn't have one yet so use the one that I put them ages ago)... I feel that instead of more power to the novel instead transfom in something least powerful...