John_Doever
LOVE IT!!!!! Author you seriously need to advertise this story or something. This is far too amazing to not be top 3. Honestly, I can’t understand why this story still isn’t at least top 10 or why My Vampire System is even high ranking at all. That story has very little effort put into it and everything is forced. This story is the opposite. The plot flows very well. I haven’t found any contradictions so far. There is a ridiculous amount of effort and time put into every chapter. God I love this story. Thanks for the chapter!!!
Ohhh ****! I can picture the entire scene. I can feel the pressure that is being in the presence of a god. I'm so pumped! I picture it now, a crusade, all.of the heroes marching towards the forest, the hero from the trio trying to convince them not to bur failing. The determind looks upon the farmers as they rise up. The dispare of the durchess as she know she is just sending them to their deaths. The count watching the marching army from the shadows. And the arrival of the new god, as he parts the trees and stands before the forest; the army of heroes quivering trying to resist their own primal fear. "Welcome to the garden. You'll make fine fertilizer." (Fade to black) >< Sorry. Got very pumped up.