John_Doever
Since the MC is immortal, I personally would like to see the story move a bit more faster so we can see people, societies and kingdoms rise and fall around him as he forever tends his garden. The slower more compact story you’re writing is still good though. I’m just voicing out my own personal opinions.
Am I the only one that yells out TRAP! When I read this? Like serious BAD IDEA NOTHING IS FREE! Mark my words, those seeds are more than likely what allowed the Forest Guardians to die. Corruption seeds to plant or something like that. Look apparently she wasn't scared at all. How did she know about him so quick? Famed ability my ass no one really bought from him until the end of the day adventures. She has the most powerful "Hero" under her control, "trying to make things better" my hairy butt! No, more than likely she is another non-human character that is causing problems. Seriously bad juju coming from this whole situation.