Comments of chapter undefined of Ascenders Rift
Ascenders Rift
ShadowsFinger
Chapter comments18
The author deleted my past review just because he can't accept the truth. Seriously. HAHAHAHAHA so that's why there's just 70+ reviews and you got high rating? What kind of author are you? So anyways, I'll just copy paste this and check every day. Repost. My past review is liked by many already. So here's the thing. This novel has a good idea. But the author ruined it in the school arc. His growth became stagnant because the author said 'hE nEeD tO hElP hIs fRiEnDs tOo' . Forced plots, romance, and too many cliche scenes! It's just like watching Spanish drama. Too predictable and guess what the author said about this? He said all of those are his well thought plots and trademark. And that's not the most infuriating part of this novel, there's many more!! The MC's girl? Guess what, her father is the owner of the Val company which is an enemy of the mc! Want more ? The mc got accused of rape, jailed for 2 yrs, got his whole life ruined, he became like a trash , and after he is released from the prison her aunt and cousin got almost all the money he need to survive in college , and in his past life he got lots of hardships because of this. Now the worse part? After going back, he did not get any revenge BECAUSE THE AUTHOR SAID HE'S AN INTELLIGENT AND UNDERSTANDING MC AND HE'S FOCUSING FOR THE FUTURE! not getting any revenge coz you're telling he's matured? Bruh the mc is a pussy. He's a Mary Sue. He told me that the mc is not only the focus of story, well you're practically right because that includes his friends and girl. Just them. Because you made all of them too op. Just behind the mc ! This novel is for those newbies, who don't mind those cliche and predictable plots. Author, if you're reading this, I'm gonna post this everyday just because you deleted my past review. Can't take criticism? :)) Oh and the author told himself that there will be more NONSENSE in the novel so i gtfo of this novel. P.S. 20th time my review is deleted
