Comments of chapter undefined of Ascenders Rift

Ascenders Rift

ShadowsFinger

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p0tat0t0mat0Lv4p0tat0t0mat0

Am I the only one who finds most of the dialogues extremely cringy and unnatural? It feels like the way the people talk and behave was directly taken from some third rate wuxia.

3yr

StupidNovelLv5StupidNovel

Nah, I think everyone else do think like that

ShadowsFinger:Yup, you might be the only one as no else finds it that way

3yr

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ArkarcLv4Arkarc

This stalker needs to go away, he is ruining the story. what a creepy asshole .

4yr

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ContesaRubiaLv13ContesaRubia

Thanks for the chapter.

4yr

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AncientguyLv6Ancientguy

Thanks

3yr

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a_commonerLv5a_commoner

This is actually so boring for a returner to have so much struggle at the start. So disappointing. When he's not smart at least he should know better not to change the script. At least not before he gained enough power.

2yr

Joe_Spanhauer4Lv15Joe_Spanhauer4

Well that was something else

3yr

fauxisLv3fauxis

Plot holes......250m he flew away due to Shockwave , I read few chapters ahead. I feel this is exaggerated , also this kid acts childish despite all his memories even though they are in fragments

3yr

StormbringerLv4Stormbringer

WTF ! those cringy generic dialogues. And then MC's personality really took a dive. He's 'assumed to be' in his third run of his life as per authors per se and yet he acts like a fckin kid.

3yr