Comments of chapter undefined of Rise of the Legendary Emperor

Rise of the Legendary Emperor

don_offl

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EnderPLLv6EnderPL

Nice chapter, but are you really prof reading this? There are double words everywhere.

3yr

knijnLv3knijn

dude get an editor/proofreader PLEASE

don_offl:yeah I put what who twice because the character was stuttering and I didn't know how to write their emotion,but if you have a better way,please tell me and I'll edit it so the next reader won't have any problem

3yr

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CouchSurfingDragonLv14CouchSurfingDragon

Brutal and honest violence. Intent in causing pain and suffering, but not excessive. You've written a good median that makes me excited to read more.

4yr

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don_offl

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Daniel_Stone_0532Lv1Daniel_Stone_0532

Always save the elf's

3yr

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AllenNeedsToWakeUpLv5AllenNeedsToWakeUp

Grammar and punctuations.. sigh

4yr

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Christian_BaseLv4Christian_Base

cringe

2yr

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NCW2Lv4NCW2

Nice. I’m seeing comments about your grammar and spelling but you seem to have proof read and edited already. Good job improving your English

3yr

DeathLingersLv13DeathLingers

hmm glad there's no romance since this sister would totally be an annoying thot and try to jump into his arms. well guess he has his first citizens. also hope he uses his magic to create the kingdom if he can't then hes not really that op for someone who left this realm

2yr

SyairhitsharddLv12Syairhitshardd

See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

3yr

Young_Dexter_1905Lv13Young_Dexter_1905

anti hero?

3yr