Aidka
You know how to let a fight flow but please try to use less repetetion. you used "when" 3 or 4 times and using middle school language ( don't take it to heart and sorry if I seem mean I didn't intended to appear so )
Thanks for the chapter.
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thx for chapter
Kind of a good spot to catch up not gonna lie... Been lovin’ the story so far, keep it up author!!!
Thanks for the chapter
Thanks !
Thanks for the chapter Never expected that
