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Comments of chapter undefined of Livid Guardian's Endless Coddling

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Arju_Manha
Arju_ManhaLv3Arju_Manha

nice story

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cloudsome
cloudsomeLv10cloudsome

At first, i was confused whether Rian is a boy or a girl. Hahaha

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Jyk
JykLv3Jyk

It's very sad. She had only father and she lost him too

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Jami_Anderson
Jami_AndersonLv14Jami_Anderson

That is so sad. It sucks to lose your parents. It's hard to snap out of it too. My heart is with you Aria. Alan is sweet to try to comfort her.

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Spotbottom
SpotbottomLv15Spotbottom

😭😭😭

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Nizza_1234
Nizza_1234Lv4Nizza_1234

Wow

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DavidDiasLugon
DavidDiasLugonLv1DavidDiasLugon

This is really sad

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Tangixi9
Tangixi9Lv13Tangixi9

Here I am again reading this book for the 6th time.

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Starrell_Palmer
Starrell_PalmerLv14Starrell_Palmer

I'm new here - I've been reading the novels for a while now, but haven't commented. This story has hooked me! Excellent work so far! ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

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DaoistlhQxLy
DaoistlhQxLyLv1DaoistlhQxLy

I feel sorry for her

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Aunty_Sally_4054
Aunty_Sally_4054Lv4Aunty_Sally_4054

Author, all that hv read so far is good. The Morgan family are really pure souls

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Eyenobong
EyenobongLv1Eyenobong

it's worth reading but this chapter got me emotional

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raymasa
raymasaLv14raymasa

So far so good

Tonukurio
TonukurioLv15Tonukurio

This chapter wasn't edited quite as well as the first chapter. I found too many problems to point out though... The problems that stood out the most are amusing malapropisms - that is where a wrong word was used instead of the right word which turned the sentence kind of funny because it still makes sense, just not the sense you wanted. Eg. aboard instead of abroad. On the other hand, the story is progressing pretty well. Some of the jumping flashbacks could have been clearer or shorter. I got confused a few times. Keep up the good work!

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Li_Yi_Wei
Li_Yi_WeiLv15Li_Yi_Wei

what about the grandfather? did he die?

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Smartina
SmartinaLv6Smartina

It's really heart breaking 💔😭

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pkpratibhapriyanka
pkpratibhapriyankaLv6pkpratibhapriyanka

Till far I like the story