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Comments of chapter undefined of A Reincarnator's Wish in Danmachi(Re-Writing in Progress)

Devil_Gamer_0071
Devil_Gamer_0071Lv2Devil_Gamer_0071

Why do i find this similar to another danmachi fanfic. Eternal steps or something

Skepparn
SkepparnLv14Skepparn

This is retarded You can’t seriously think that making him mentally unstable 6ch in is a good idea right? Cause this is just pathetic and I feel shame for not having anything better to do than continue reading this trash

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Coeur_noirs
Coeur_noirsLv5Coeur_noirs

Hum do he have a mantal problem i mean if somebody say to you that you will break by just training,training,training will you cry like him only unstable, retarded, true idior or a little child will cry

Snake551g
Snake551gLv12Snake551g

I gotta ask is he literally mentally handicapped because that was just random as hell

Requiem_Soul
Requiem_SoulLv10Requiem_Soul

Wtf is this ‘break’ ****? When light mentioned that he straight up crying ? Wtf is this? Is this some lot or character development? Because it make no fucking sense? He just got reincarnated and his will is so weak? Why would he start breaking up? This ‘break’ concept of yours are literally make no sense?

Na1gel
Na1gelLv4Na1gel

this is why i hate systems" with an fucking voice" all these retard "protoganist" are using them as a fucking CRUTCH or as a love intrest its fkn patathic that a guy from our world needs to make lovy dovy talk to a system but enough about that cant really say i like the mc at all and its not just becouse his fucking breakdown , its becouse he CANT DO ANYTHING by himself " light you decide what magic to use light how do i train , light how do i pull down my pants and take a piss ?, light how do i eat ? ... **** man make your character man up ffs , i dont really know hy all authors make some sad backstory to the mc it isent really needed for the story its overused allmost 99% of the readers are bored with the concept of cry me a river backstory at this point

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Izayori_Em
Izayori_EmLv14Izayori_Em

I feel like it's better to say that he's mentally unstable due to his lack of social interactions and goals. The amount of dependability he has for light by the fact that she's the only one he can trust and look to for guidance at the moment causes her words have a more direct impact on him adding on to his lack of purpose or motivation for improving he is now like a doll moving with no desire and only cause they are told to do so. Him crying is because he most likely realizes this to an extent but still lost in what he should do for himself besides training. Ofcourse this is just my view on it since he still a kid in a new world and the only thing to accompany him is a system which is loyal to him and has only been helpful during this time both emotionally and physically only to be told that he has been on a path of self destruction.

Angelus0511
Angelus0511Lv4Angelus0511

He is an ***** based on mental age (18) who grew up in a community, it makes no sense to cry for not having goals, he is an ***** raised in a society in which if you have no goals you fall In social ruin, that has to be corrected. Apart is in a world where you can do what you want with enough force you should only biscar to do as alchemy, blacksmithing, whatever. Man i don't understand.

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yokedjaguar
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So he's overly reliant on the system and nows he mentally unstable, great.

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Spee_Sage
Spee_SageLv4Spee_Sage

Child 18 years old......unstable period ?

Auriolus
AuriolusLv5Auriolus

It's really out of blue author. We don't know his past so we cannot relate that's why there's so many hate. To be honest when I saw "break", I already think about E.P.I.C I think theres an influence. Be strong author!

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watashiwavdesu
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As i said, this chapter, now doesn't have anymore that "random cries" and his retard vibe is gone, hope you now can hold the beer of Ethan?🤣 No joke,i considered the situation for days and i finally decided myself, Purge all this chapter, I will never have him cry without a clearly reason or else i wil get myself killed.

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Licorice
LicoriceLv6Licorice

i cried only for 2 reasons - sad music and fake tears to get something from parents

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Lalalalal2424
Lalalalal2424Lv3Lalalalal2424

i am 20yo and i dont have a goal :c give me a system :D

Ryuu23
Ryuu23Lv5Ryuu23

I really did not like the reaction of the hero to the words of Light and his absolute trust in her. Still, telling a person that he has cancer or that he will “break” if he continues to train is completely different. Not to mention the fact that Light spent his points and made decisions for him. But worst of all, it reminded me of another fanfiction, where the hero gathered a huge harem, but was still a “broken” man and the girls “protected” him. It got to the point that they even made a schedule when they could be with him. I sincerely hope that this **** will not be here. If I wanted to read this, then I returned to that fanfiction, where there are more than 1300 chapters, and I read only 400+.

NoDajModa
NoDajModaLv14NoDajModa

Da fuk with him crying like little bit ch out of nothing

Darkanlan
DarkanlanLv11Darkanlan

This is too random. A person's personality is literally shaped as they live and the experiences they go through. Saying he'll change or break is literally going against how a person's personality even comes into being. People grow and adapt, that's how life is. All creatures are that way. So making it like he'll break or change into something new that is a problem of some kind, that really shouldn't exist. That's literally all growing up is. Changing to adapt to a new social environment based on where you place yourself in society at different ages with different responsibilities. Welcome to what is known as growing up and no longer being a child.

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yeutra
yeutraLv5yeutra

system with a mind of it own is annoying

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Lord_Snow
Lord_SnowLv6Lord_Snow

Lol if he enjoy training can you really say his not enjoying himself?.

NP_3228
NP_3228Lv5NP_3228

did he wish for a system or a psychiatrist? The hell does a system know about a human mind? It would be one thing if the god was saying this, but its a system. A glorified AI. Why are u making it seem like he has no EQ? He could fall in love or make friend while he is adventuring you kno. It's not like he's going to cultivate in a cave for 300 years.

F1nal
F1nalLv6F1nal

dfq is this chapter