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Comments of chapter undefined of AU Villain Deku

OtakuFanLOver
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I loved the story and the ending was wonder full. IL loved how toga and deku are finally sharing emotions with each other.Hope that in the future you become a great righter. Keep up and follow your heart.

Junior_Cruz_7295
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I would like to know if this story has been droped, it's so good and I want to read more.

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Randomystic
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This volume was amazing, while the love was a little rushed you’ve been improving as you go. Deku doesn’t seem like a 2d character and his quirk can be used to explain his extreme changes in personality. The next volume should have him go through some internal struggle. He betrayed his mom, his ‘friends’, and I doubt he doesn’t feel at least some remorse for killing a bunch of people. Since he won’t be using his quirk as much when he’s caring for Toga, maybe the mental corruption will be lower and Deku will realize what he has done and must come to terms with it. An apology to his mother or some form of reconciliation because Deku doesn’t hate his mom. And if he saves Eri that could be a way to make up for the evils he did. He is still a villain but he should keep some morals and by raising Eri with Toga as a mom(I would love to see this) their relationship can grow. And than throw in the heroes kidnapping Eri under the pretense of ‘saving’ and Deku goes on another kill spree. Hope this comment gives some ideas. (I still want Deku and Toga to be Eri’s parents and get some wholesome scenes)

Dylan_Styles
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Its 6:20 in the morning, i binge read all of your chapters... Suggestions you ask? DO YOUR THING, WHAT YOU ARE DOING IS GREAT KEEP DOING IT.

MeiTheLazyHamster
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i can't wait for volume 3 and thanks for the chapter~

Jaxsin
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I will also be making a new series, Its a Broly Fanfic.

Mika_Martin
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So I guess its gonna be either that with deku the villian league will overpower the yakuza or if it still comes to an coorparation, the heros stand no chanes against their combined power

FvckinBored
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thank you for the chapter!

WyvernIIV
WyvernIIVLv4WyvernIIV

Sooo looking forward to the 3rd volume👍👏👏

Overwrit
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Honestly, the story is good, but how is Deku now, or the paths he takes, like saving Eri, getting attached quickly, etc., I don't really like.

Book_Nerd_7768
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I love this story so much. I really appreciate your work. I have binged this fanfic until I almost passed out from lack of sleep.

Upbeatrat
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Nice

97Alex
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Well, this is one hell of a ride, i honestly love the story a lot, its an interesting take on a different possible route in the original story. I love how he struggles with the quirk and how it affects him, the different interactions he has with others, especially when he goes nuts. Though i binged this and now i am sad and lonely and wishing for more chapters :( So i shall eagerly wait for more.

PandaZ
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Was this fanfic dropped

volacticveil
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when is the next chapter

Nikeo_Gabaoen
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Aaghhhhh!!! This is so freaking great!!! It's so nice!! And I LOVE IT! Can't wait for the next volume!!☺️

GrimM
GrimMLv2GrimM

This is really good, i wait for new chapters

babababa
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this was amazing im excited to read more if you continue the story.

Ibraheem_Shelbaya
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enjoyed reading, wonder when the next volume will release, hope for it to be soon.

forfun_6580
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Dude I haven't read anything like this in a while I gotta say love your work keep it up I can't wait to see your next chapter