Encantadia
I agree with the one dropping the story and decided to unread anymore...isnt it too long for the chapters? so then it seemed being forced and the flowing of the story such a rebound. its just less interesting and unreal though i know its just a fiction story but still as such a reader who followed u since the beginning, i lost the feeling...i once seemed familiar with these characters just like they're real but now i feel strange...i hope u understand what i mean as i always read a story to get to know the characters and put my feelings and thoughts in each story...not just read and done. please get back on ur track as a good story teller through out ur writing....and dont get trapped in too long chapters but lost the essence of the main story itself...hope u take it as a positive thoughts. Gbu