Comments of chapter undefined of DXD: Golden King of Lucifer [COMPLETED]

Instant mastery always, and I mean always, make the story boring.

why so mixed up markings? "" for conversation '' for thought is THE standard and anything other than those are retarded

The wishes look good. Not like some novels where MC asks for some weak abilities. I mean who wouldn't ask for strong powers when reincarnating into a fictional world where you can be killed. So good wishes there author.

so he didn't remember his name and past life but he remember the anime?? lol 😂😂

Thanks to other Fan-Fics Uchiha Sharingans make me cringe and lose interest, maybe die a little on the inside. we'll see~

Hate reading stories where the author writes conversations like they think they're a screenwriter. You're writing a story, not a play, don't write conversations like that. I immediately drop a story if they do.

Smart guy. I like his wish choices. Often the MC will pick some useless or stupid **** and then roll through the story on a pair of turd roller skates

Personally, this has started pretty bad. You had a normal soul escape from reincarnation and floating in the void and instead of God trying to figure out how this happened in case of more souls escaping he instead just gives him 5 wishes for no reason. It also doesn't help that your character is instantly OP with even 1 of his wishes. Just have him go up and slap anyone in his way and tell them how it will be. The end.

i were to get 5 wishes it would be omnipotent omniscient omnipresent , saiki s powers , Saitama s powers [img=recommend]

Ohhh, Vector Manipulation, that's a smart one

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Why always from star overpower it make boring

Remember he a new author so dont blame him for using over used plot ideas all new authors do such things since rarely do new authors do new ideas untill they at least got a few good recieved novels.

Obrigado pelo capítulo

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