You still have to correct the money settlement. 50 million plus 50 million only equals 100 million. Perhaps you meant 500
million plus 500 million? That would equal to 1 billion.
Don't worry @amrutha no one is a know it all. And it take time to perfect a thing. All is good as long as you are trying to improve. And I love your novel. Keep up your work.
I had my doubts when I first read this. But! But about afew chapters I was interested (hooked)
I must say that there was a lot of mistakes, but it's still good. So I will throw stone at this and follow for Updates! Keep up the hard work. You got me as a follower!
Author your storyline is beautiful, interesting, intriguing and heart touching. I couldn't stop reading.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]