Comments of chapter undefined of Rebirth to have a happy life

The story is good and it's not overly dramatic. But I think most of the grammar mistakes can be tackled if you re read them 2 3 times. Not all as I know how it is not having english as 1st language but atleast most of them mainly where you misplace a word thinking about something else. And also for everyone to understand you can try changing mua to aunt as people not from india cannot always remember what mua stands for I faced this problem while reading Chinese novels sometimes. But i like the story and its natural settings. Well done. You are doing a good work. Continue. All the best.

very good.ple@se do not give up on this..