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Comments of chapter undefined of Ma'am You Have Been Uncovered

Alexandra_Almazan
Alexandra_AlmazanLv4Alexandra_Almazan

i want face slap now please

snowflakes
snowflakesLv11snowflakes

what's the use of going to school when she wont even cooperate with the lessons? author you better make her stay at home and focus on her hacking job instead. I like the story but there are so many contradictions on the characters.

Chelsey_Smith1995
Chelsey_Smith1995Lv13Chelsey_Smith1995

The writer seems a bit *******ish and has trouble carrying the mysterious atmosphere correctly. But it's not so bad. The characters are well developped and I sort of like not having everything spoon fed to me. The details are quite obvious though.

MummyMumh
MummyMumhLv13MummyMumh

I don’t know if it’s the writing style or the poor translation (there are lots of small mistranslating errors which change the meaning and context) that makes the flow so awkward. It’s very difficult to read and very confusing. The scenes jump around. Characters are not introduced properly. Most times I’m trying to figure out who “the juvenile” or “the young man” is, like is the 1st person of 2nd person in the scene! Half the time I’m trying to decipher the scene and make autocorrections because the text doesn’t make sense. It’s like reading a slightly better version of MTL. Also in my opinion the writer seems to be be overly descriptive of the most mundane things and actions, and that takes away any punchiness the plot has. As a result instead of an air of mystery, it feels more boring, dragged out and contrived. Its really frustrating because I think it has the plot has the potential to be a great story. Also the translator choice of vocabulary doesn’t help. It doesn’t feel natural. Like “brain” instead of “head” as a prime example.

1245geuwjakf
1245geuwjakfLv51245geuwjakf

Everything is so confusing in this novel .please add important details

Bad_Captain
Bad_CaptainLv3Bad_Captain

One of the most important problems with the novel is we don’t know a lot about some important characters. I understand you might be waiting for a good chance to reveal everything, but to understand the characters more we need a little backstory on them.

Chubu
ChubuLv4Chubu

They make everything too mysterious and I can tell they’re gonna drag things on. This novel probably has 1000 or so chapters 🙄

1234username
1234usernameLv51234username

yeah the author might not be able to put d plot out there as some of us may want. but we should still try to tone down our voice of dissention. it is not easy to marry words together 😉. if is that easy those of us that can write long epistle of critique can try writing their own novels to see how easy it is to satisfy many people.

Botts
BottsLv10Botts

23 chapters... My interest is running out.. Dropping this soon.

Seli_Akosua
Seli_AkosuaLv1Seli_Akosua

too much repetition about who Qin Yu was,who liked and adored her and co I guess...

Sindisiwe_Sono
Sindisiwe_SonoLv4Sindisiwe_Sono

I don't get why geniuses are depicted this way in these novels,,she should have just finished her studies at a young age then and busy herself with everything else than slack and drop out and act dumb 🙄,why is she attending if she will just work hard on getting zerro

littlevincent
littlevincentLv13littlevincent

thank you for the chaptet

Shilpa_Bhoskar
Shilpa_BhoskarLv4Shilpa_Bhoskar

Qin Ran is inthe school on a mission it seems, so she does not want to pass and goto another university

mhira_7418
mhira_7418Lv11mhira_7418

ugh she's so fake.

dzoan
dzoanLv6dzoan

a bit dragging.

Mtrauliah98
Mtrauliah98Lv4Mtrauliah98

🙄

DosDiosas
DosDiosasLv14DosDiosas

GOOD

serenity260479
serenity260479Lv6serenity260479

thanks for the chapter

mheai24
mheai24Lv13mheai24

thank you for the chapter

romans
romansLv6romans

😜