Comments of chapter undefined of Hidden Omega

Sure! You write some of the best scenes I've ever read. I can follow the descriptions in my head and they make sense. They aren't cheesy and you do a good job of making the reader excited as well.

OMFG that was so hot!! I was so happy when a new chapter was released. Will you are the man!! . Initiating the first move not allowing the Alpha to take the lead, that just shows how much will love Jayden and wants to be all his. Thank you so much Author.

GET PREGNANT WILL! We’re trying to make a sports team out here 😝😝😝 Oohhh ohhh ohhh what a way to start my day!!! Thank you 😊

And he's going to get pregnant again

THAT WAS SO F**KING HOT!!!🌋AUTHOR GREAT JOB!!! JAYDEN AND WILL ARE AHHHH IDEK!!! I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!

I think you do an amazing job at writing the sex parts... Very good! Just to say "drooling" is kinda weird lol but I get it!

Talking about the past. It's getting more exciting! Thank you author for the update

OMG THIS CHANCE. Jayden should just out himself. Say he had quite the wild past. THEN! If ever the gang sends the photos, Will knows it's from the past omg! <3

this turned me on. nyahahahahaha. sizzling! i think ill dream of this.

The sex scenes are AWESOME!!! 🔥🔥🔥🔥 I love your description because it is hot, realistic, consuming, intoxicating..... did I say f*cking Hot🔥🔥🔥!!! To tell you the truth, tb e exceptionally great smut is what caught my attention at first, and the the story..plot... content...stole my attention and from there, I was totally hooked. You do a great job of balancing it. I've seen stories that are full of cheesy smut with very shallow content and unrealistic storylines. I lose interest in such stories very fast 🤷🏽‍♀️ But with this story,..... I'm totally captivated and enjoying every bit of it.

What a yummy 😋😋😋 beautiful chapter ❤️❤️❣️❤️❣️,now the talking drums is set,Will my love let Jay know how to help you to kick some of the nightmares away,Jayden my boy,all I can say you made me proud,and Author keep it coming but please no more heartache but let Jay know about the pics before anyone,am in Love 💯🤩❤️👌💐🔥🔥🌹💃,Will get ready you are a Momma again after today💯💯💯💯

Oh dear monkeys!!!! That was hot! Will take the lead!

Olá, maravilhosa sua história, mas uma coisa não sai da minha cabeça como ele conheceu o Will? Ele falou que o viu no filme, mas como foi, autor por favor nós conte em detalhes 🥰

ngl I hope that jeyden is actually good and the pictures talked about was just of his past and that's it cuz I'm feeling for dad uwu

you'll never see this, so I'll have to write it again, but these are actually super high quality. until now, I thought you wrote a smut book or something lol

We couldn't have asked for a better *** scene on engagement day. Whew! That was so hurt.

Wow so hot 🔥 🔥🔥🔥

Your writing is amazing you can picture the scenes and ( for me) hear the sound I love the book the development of the characters and I love the intimate sense you are a great writer and I would love to keep reading your work!!! 😆

The sex scenes are hot 🔥 and sexy! I love to read them 😍 and I think that they improved chapter by chapter