K_B_Bloom
I really love your story and I canāt wait to read more of it! Iāve been binging on it for two days straight, from the moment I wake up, to the moment I go to sleep.In the story you have misspelled words many times, have had a paragraph repeat itself once, and donāt arrange words properly as they should be used... not trying to be mean just trying to give some helpful criticism! If you could fix that I would love that because it does often me up when Iām reading out loud. I know this was posted a while ago, and itās likely changed now, so hopefully this has changed since then! Thank you for writing this amazing story I love it with all my heart!ā¤ļø