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Comments of chapter undefined of The Ancient Genes

d_dvd1
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Why does he have calm mind but still gets so stressed up?

Just_A_Bored_Otaku
Just_A_Bored_OtakuLv5Just_A_Bored_Otaku

..... Anything goes ? Gets randomly dropped, ends up at the place he's searching for, idiots openly saying what they are planning ?

ButterOfEternity
ButterOfEternityLv12ButterOfEternity

dear author, could you even pretend that you are trying?

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Dastan
DastanLv13Dastan

Publish more

MagnuS
MagnuSLv13MagnuS

I feel like it's pretty stupid that until now they haven't developed tech that can make you communicate with someone even though a formation is turned on

Jacek2305
Jacek2305Lv4Jacek2305

I think that old man knew where they are, but maybe wasn't sure

Navizy
NavizyLv4Navizy

Nice, keep the POVs minimum.

SomePeasant
SomePeasantLv14SomePeasant

Wait, how did he find those guys??

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Anthony_Aguilar_3980
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Siegfred
SiegfredLv10Siegfred

Way to go MC[img=recommend]

crinox1
crinox1Lv4crinox1

gotta work on the coincidence more. firmly play on his bad luck, like in Lightning is the Only Way. that way when you deus ex the story, it fits logic that is already around.

Nickjr321
Nickjr321Lv14Nickjr321

Thx

Ricko_wijaya
Ricko_wijayaLv15Ricko_wijaya

Keep it up