Comments of chapter undefined of The Ancient Genes

Thanks for chapter. I like this story very much. I might be late but here are some suggestions. I hope it helps. Ok, here are some suggestions: - Try to limit the pov changes in a chapter to 2. - Try to ask help of friends/fans who are good at English to correct spelling and grammar mistakes. - Read paragraph and chapter comments and respond to them. - If you see a comment pointing to grammer or spelling mistake immediately rectify. Atleast new readers will have a better experience reading this wonderful story.

I really hate this changes POV's everytime, use more narrative elements please! But the story is so good, ty!

Like it so far, try to tighten up the last 3 or so chapters. Basically since he shows up at the mercs house. It lost me and I had to reread to figure out what was happening to who. I would suggest an editor or even just someone to pre-read before posting. As someone who enjoys writing, sometimes things may seem clear to you as the author, but confuse the reader. I know this is late, but better late than never.

Droped.

Honestly i dont have problems with these perspective but statistically, novel with narrative style tends to be more popular and last longer than the one with multiple perspective

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Thanks for the chapter!