Comments of chapter undefined of The Ancient Genes

I think this story needs a TEEN tag

Can you stop with all the POV changes? It is irritating. If you want to write a screenplay, this is not the place to do it.

Yes, don't meditate to get stronger faster

That's enough of this novel for me, thank you very much

Omg I can't stop laughing at the Mc's stupidity and reading all those funny comments.

Dont tell me that missing kid is linked to the demonic presence XD

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I just want to tell the author about the spacing like ah? don't use too much spacing cause its really a bad sight and very confusing (for me). "Hi, I am Max." like that not, " Hi , I am Max ". It's a pain to read, I just hope you fixes this ^_^

This kid 😑😑😑

Ngl i would personally beat the fatty up, he is actually a ****te human being compared to others.

j'arrete ce roman voir autant le MC etre aussi idiot et malmener par des connerie ca ma fatigue

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Thx