Comments of chapter undefined of The Ancient Genes

The POV writing style is making the story worse than than it already is

The ****ty generic misunderstanding that's not the MC's fault that all ****ty authors use

Bruh this pov is trash this novel about to head to the trash cann I see many unhappy readers but hopefully the author will fix it . Has potential if he able to get what he trying to project to the readers but the POV making it sloppy

Its the author here. Lately, I haven't been receiving much of comments or reviews. So I just want to say it to the one who is reading this. If you won't tell me, I won't know how I am doing. if you think I am doing bad and you're not liking it. Just point it out . I will be very happy. So comment, review and help me to improve.

change of POV, is making this unreadable

I really like your work :) keep it coming!!!

thank you. though too many pov’s. too many cliches scene already showed in way too many novels. i still appreciate though

I mean... Didn’t they just awakened their element a few months back?? They already so terrifying with just aura?? What is this ****

Don't you think that the mc is too immature for his age?

Thx

Thanks for the chapter

so pathetic and naive the mc couldn't even comprehend the situation

Honestly after I pay 20 dollar I can not afford I will just give up reading until the paychek comes again next month s and do you think I love doing that !

I relove wednovel b but life is hard a gett harder and you have to understand you just charge just to much ! Your work is great but d or anyone underst we old people don’t have the money and read is a part of keepin our mind workin besides the fact of having a dream !

Why do you think we will go fine your book ! Don’t you know it’s because we can’t afford to read your book and that’s because we don’t work and the money we get it’s eating or not have a out ! To have a tomorrow that we want or wish like old people we are ! Or don’t you relieve we old people have an income that just like me rather not eat and dream !’

I nderstand someo stole you work but really I don’t understand every chapter telling me !

I love your book 😘keep it up 👍

thank u

How stupid is this MC.Not remembering faces of people that can hurt you after getting a warning just the day before.That guy even showed him their faces.Plus POV not good at all.

everyone's saying they dont like the POV the POV is called third person omniscient and I find it entertaining if you dont like it dont read. anyway thank you author I really like your writing style. (I'm a bit late lol)