Comments of chapter undefined of The Changeling: A Quest For Time

On the forum, I said I might comment on stories too if I was interested enough to do so. And now, here I’ll say this. Good ending to the prologue. It was small, unexpected twist, even if somewhat ordinary with the x years, the world change trope. But I like to assert that tropes and cliches aren’t necessarily bad. It’s all about execution. And here, you did a good job of gently crafting a village-y quaint setting, an old man among bubbly children, to then introduce the first insight into the story’s main events and or backstory. To be honest, I wasn’t particularly gripped by the beginning with the girl gathering her friends. But the writing was good enough to make me want to continue, so kudos to you. I will touch upon your writing more in depth/specifically later.