Comments of chapter undefined of The Rebirth Of A White Robe Man: I'll Follow You This Time (BL)

Tried reading. The idea is definitely good. But the narratives being in present tense kind of weirded me out. Some sentences were so long that it was tiring to even read them. I hope you could find an editor to edit your work. Good luck to your writing! 😁

I already added this to my library looking forward for more chapters 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

🤧🤧🤧🤧 I really hate traitors!

am i the only one screaming for an editor

Editor's definitely needed here! I simply love it when MC's the one on top! Hahaha, finally here's the one! Please have an editor though, it'll absolutely be perfect!

Sound interesting. I will add to library. Good work author, do your best!! Thanks in advance for your hard work. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

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An interesting first chapter

This is awesome!

this story very interestingnya

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Thanks for chapter.

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A good book! The narratives were kind of confusing though. I had to read it again in order for me to fully understan. It can still improve so I'm looking forward to it 😍

I really hate betrayal the most. And did that moron just say "they don't need another person who has more power than them?" ─or something like that─ Is he nuts?! Losing Shao Cheng means having a great loss! Anyhow, the ending of this chapter is quite satisfying. WAHAHAHAHAHA

I added this novel to my library a while ago and never got a chance to read it. Turns out it’s written by one of my favorite authors 😌 Ah, I already know I’m gonna like this 👍

There is a lot of things to revise in this chapter. The tenses throw me off. Also, don't use currently, since you're showing us what's happening of course it is happening in that instance. Another word to avoid on writing is instantly, immediately, but not always... there are exceptions to it.

I think this book is nice

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