Comments of chapter undefined of Multi-Gene

The MC doesn't remain stupid he starts to do things smarter in later chapters. The Author introduced the MC as an idiot muscle-brain who says he won't think because it hurts. The author later explains, in later chapters, that the MC really does feel real pain when trying to think about things. This is due to the fact that something changed in his new body when he transmigrated into this world and his brain works far to strongly for his cultivation level and his current body doesn't seem to be able to handle it. As we get into later chapters he starts to be less stupid and does things with a bit more thought. It seems to have gotten much better than the start of the LN.

Very poorly edited chapter. Author needs to do a better job

So the MC just ignored the influx of memories but then gabe an explanation through an inner monologue about what is going on..?!??

Just an fyi author, Rome does not have Romanians but Romans

Well the Alpha and his Parents gave their consent to this dangerous test and follow-up torture. The MC did not. I hope he won't let the knob-gobblers off easy. Come out like Wolverine, coming out of the Adamantium Vat, killing everyone in sight!!!

The need for a competent editor and/or proof reader is very high! I don't know if I care to continue.

Exposition the chapter

694-713 are just repeats. Don't spend your money on this.

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Hey Memnon, im about to delete my novel and post a better one with less mistakes

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Aunque tiene sus errores en general me gusto por favor sigue con la novela creo q la trama es muy interesante (:

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please let the MC be a werewolf

Good so far, but if i have to pay the coins i don't have. i will kill all of you.

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