PancakesWitch
This novel is so broken, no balance or future planning at all. First evolution, small butterfly is buff like JoJo and can scare others into submission. Fish in the random forest river splits trees with casual attack. Little too no transitions before changing topics or time at all. It's a kind of a primitive reading, because i know it can get better with time, but i cannot see it getting far as author left very little room for development after just a few chapters. I will see how it's going to turn up, of course, bit i have little hope.