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Comments of chapter undefined of Immortal Only Accepts Female Disciples

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Immortal Only Accepts Female Disciples

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R41K0
R41K0Lv11R41K0

Se nota que el autor es un amateur aún, los tiempos en la novela de un arco a otro arco son muy malos, la batalla con los demonios, el viaje a la orden virtuosa y la próxima reunión entre maestros de espadas pasa a la vez. Se nota que el autor no tiene pensado los siguientes pasos de la novela y está escribiendo sobre la marcha

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Archit_Ayush
Archit_AyushLv4Archit_Ayush

O just hope the MC doesn't behave like a beta because in the recent chapters I find himself becoming a beta. He is making enemies left and right yet he isn't making himself stronger. Author, if you are going to give him a plot armour please don't do that instead make him stronger now.

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Kirbyisgreen
KirbyisgreenAuthorKirbyisgreen

This is the end of the arc, the arc of Long Yifei starts soon after a few short stories.

2yr
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RasaKeju
RasaKejuLv12RasaKeju

thanks for chapter

2yr
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Count_Fro
Count_FroLv15Count_Fro

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Khirodra
KhirodraLv4Khirodra

thanks for the chapter

2yr
Stylistwordl
StylistwordlLv4Stylistwordl

thanks for chapter

2yr
BlueGrimmoire
BlueGrimmoireLv13BlueGrimmoire

Thanks for the hapter

2yr
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