Comments of chapter undefined of Immortal Only Accepts Female Disciples

O just hope the MC doesn't behave like a beta because in the recent chapters I find himself becoming a beta. He is making enemies left and right yet he isn't making himself stronger. Author, if you are going to give him a plot armour please don't do that instead make him stronger now.

This is the end of the arc, the arc of Long Yifei starts soon after a few short stories.

thanks for chapter

Se nota que el autor es un amateur aún, los tiempos en la novela de un arco a otro arco son muy malos, la batalla con los demonios, el viaje a la orden virtuosa y la próxima reunión entre maestros de espadas pasa a la vez. Se nota que el autor no tiene pensado los siguientes pasos de la novela y está escribiendo sobre la marcha

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the hapter