Comments of chapter undefined of Super Detective in the Fictional World

Not really, it failed to bring out the greatness somehow. I mean this is not a very great intro

Not sure it's really possible to become a police officer in a month. They'd have to hiring at the time, but you'd also have to go to training first, which would probably be at set times per year, train, and graduate, and be accepted at any particular office.

MC seems to be a lazy bastard that wasted last 13 years waiting for system to give him a life

I still can't get past a System mission of becoming a police officer in just one month. I mean, WTF? Did the author make any attempt to research this?

Okay this story is all over the place, the transition from him being in the hospital and then back to the house when he passed out doesn't even exist so I don't realize until I read a part that happened in the very start of this chapter.

At least the intro is slightly different... it starts with a character who already has a system since birth. And it's a reticent system with no AI. So I hope the MC better be intriguing to make up for the lack of an interesting AI character

A little confused start, mainly about the time he lived before the system activated...

Mmmmmmm Thats pretty good.

Tks Chapt

interesante

average compared to other read trail. like "48 hour day" or "universe's unlimited boss" or " losing money tycoon" ect..... of course this is just the first chapter. we will wait and see.

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