Comments of chapter undefined of Chaos Eyes

really simple and easy to consume writing, I was on board for a second and I completed the 1st chapter without any break, seeing work like this inspired me now to write more of my story, you guys are invited to read my shounen/action/fantasy novel Phoenix Zero! (Whoosh! Did a little advertisement of myself there, but honestly I loved the 1st chapter, it was written in a way as if I was watching an interesting anime, aside from some of the grammatical mistakes, this beginning is absolutely 🔥)