Comments of chapter undefined of Dawn of the First Emperor

you really now how to make chapters long that's the best part of the book

question, there's something i didn't get did Jake die

A honest review #6 It's so freaking funny and realistic! The protag is very cometic lol ... since it was transmigration you can see how the protag was able to adapt in his situation showing he is quick witted... the chapter ends with a hint of suspense which is good! (Shamelessly asking to please also rate my story: Incomplete Metamorphosis T^T)