Comments of chapter undefined of Ascension of the elder

Like the mic drop on the dad.. funny

This needs an editor. Interesting story so far, but spelling and punctuation mistakes make it worse than it should be

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The first step on the road of being a Boss, make the necessary moves as needed!

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This story is herd to read with so many grammar errors.

Thank you for the chapter !

Thx