The pace is fine. I like the interactions. I know you're busy with MVS, and try write chapters for this story when you can. I still feel like the only way out from the place is in a body bag.
Please give 3 likes for xp
who else is thinking that something is going to happen and Roy is going to save Sylvia regain his reputation in Quinn's eyes at least by a little bit and we'll see where it goes from there