JKSManga
What was the point of his backstory if you are just going to ignore it all anyway and make your MC a pathetic, weak hypocrite? What a joke.
Liked this up until the dumb poor writers failure of I’m terrible at writing so my characters age isn’t a real thing so 5 year olds are basically 18-30 year olds in coordination traits and 1000 year old things act like they’re 5. A 4 year old performing an axe kick what a literal horrible writing. Add 10 more years to make your story make sense or just spew up garbage to fit a poor idea path? HMMMMM
so many naysayers early on... He's a goddamn dragon for freaks' sake they are born strong, the most spoiled species in fantasies. you gotta believe they'll pretty much be all brawn when not alot of people can stand up to their Base might. shove a meathead dragon's soul into a body of human and see if he can utilize his body's to its full potential. He's not one of those uber Talented dragon type, his just a incredibly strong dragon in his past life, which is why he was defeated in the end since (I am filling in the gaps) he probably fights mostly by instincts and his arrogance prevents him from doing something undragon like. shove that kind of dragon soul in a weak body that is a anatomically different from its original, his past memories are mostly a hindrance to him now.
I said he in another novel by this author, and I would like to say it again. If your going to criticize a story, please at least leave some polite, helpful suggestions, I am sick and tired of all this unhelpful negativity. Most of the time it just makes the author have a lower so asteem, s I would personally enjoy it if people stopped with pointless, stupid negativity, and add some positives, or some suggestions instad
this is not good in any type, shape or form tbh. it's just utter nonsense that a dragon who was once over 1000 years old can't adapt to his now human body. biggest fail for me though is that he has no talent for magic like.....are you serious? a dragon's soul can't use magic? 8 chapters in and i really think this is not a well written novel (i would even go as far as to say it's borderline as bad as it could get) still giving it a shot for a couple chapters more though.....*sigh*