Comments of chapter undefined of Olivia Sparks

It's quite unfortunate... she's been betrayed or backstabbed before, I feel like max should give her space before he explains. It feels like he's rushing it.

Baby steps little prince

I got a feeling I probably won't like what's coming. I just like relationships where the people talk about what they're feeling as it progresses. He's trying he has a long way to go but he's trying. She seems hypocritical to me. I just have one question is there anytime where he stops talking to her instead of the other way around and she tries her best to get his forgiveness? I kinda dont like the fact the guy so far is the only one that apologises.

Once you’ve been betrayed, it is sooo hard to trust your feelings. I just hate her rethinking every emotion she has!

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Thanks for the information 😁

I meant like characters get married when they just meet and everyone's so excited but when the guys starts dating her it's rushed because he's thinking of the long term. I mean make a choice either the guy doesn't think of a future with her and only thinks of the short term or he thinks of the future and knows she's gonna be his everything. I mean it's one of the two. 🤷🏽‍♀️🤷🏽‍♀️🤷🏽‍♀️

Slowly but surely you gonna have place in olivia heart

I honestly don't like Maxen, she should just be with Tristan instead.

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