Comments of chapter undefined of Master of the Omnitrix

Master of the Omnitrix

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Lion_styloLv6Lion_stylo

the jumpy writing feels kind of amateurish. it feels like I'm reading through a series of drafts at a steady pace. the issue has gotten even more pronounced in recent chapter. Anyways, I like Ben 10 so I'll keep on reading even though 33 percent of the time my brain can't keep up

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Project_Artemis_Lv13Project_Artemis_

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Natanael486Lv4Natanael486

Thanks for the chapter

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Mr_BirbLv4Mr_Birb

is this the legendary 2nd person narrative ?!

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Lord_DisasterLv4Lord_Disaster

is there going to be a harem?

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Sparda_D_AlexLv1Sparda_D_Alex

next cap?

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mugetsu700Lv4mugetsu700

Thanks for the chapter

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AknokLv5Aknok

Thanks

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AbombLv4Abomb

Thanks for the chapter

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Esperto02Lv5Esperto02

nice

2yr

AlexPeLv2AlexPe

what a good gift

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