Comments of chapter undefined of A Second Chance At Love

A Second Chance At Love

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Mika_Carter_DavisLv15Mika_Carter_Davis

Too much narration and not enough dialogue to develop the characters. Therefore, it’s telling rather than showing; also, it’s best to use double quotations marks for the speech. Single quotation marks are typically for inner thoughts.

2yr

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noted... :)

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FleurlovingLv14Fleurloving

Her choice of leaving is the right choice. Starting a new job, new place, new scenery, and hopefully new man.

4yr

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Terra_4LanaiLv15Terra_4Lanai

I don't want her to miss her flight to Greece! Something is wrong, Aaron should know her better than that!

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emgeemgeeLv10emgeemgee

good choice of words, pacing , plot...nice one author

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Missme_GinaLv15Missme_Gina

Hopefully she makes the right decision and harden up her heart for whatever storms that bout to come her way!

4yr

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lireds09Lv14lireds09

Hopefully she won't change her mind on going to Greece

4yr

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jane_kiinamahLv4jane_kiinamah

I have almost read all of your books and find them intriguing n thoughtful written

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jane_kiinamahLv4jane_kiinamah

Thanks again for the update Enjoying immensely can't wait for more

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FocusedBatLv2FocusedBat

Even if he thought she had cheated, that doesnt give him the right to be so inhumane. Cant wait for karma to tear him apart.

3yr

Daoist858960Lv11Daoist858960

It's good she left his sorry ass... He isn't worth the air she breathes

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sadiah69Lv13sadiah69

You're done a right choice....👍👍👍

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kittycatlaneLv14kittycatlane

I think she made the right choice. What else could she do? He's cheated, and done everything he could to destroy her. Yes, she's doing what's best for her.

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