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Comments of chapter undefined of Risen World

callMeDaddy
callMeDaddyLv3callMeDaddy

from this chapter we can tell that his family would be okay until their reunion

ChadFacts
ChadFactsLv2ChadFacts

I'm dumbfounded. This quality is actually good? And then there's not even spelling mistakes, just more of a one per two pages small grammatical errors? Why can't every author be this good?

magapi
magapiLv4magapi

nice second chap....the mc personality and background is interesting....thx for the chap....

Doverow
DoverowLv13Doverow

Good start, with a good hook too.

Kirbyisgreen
KirbyisgreenLv4Kirbyisgreen

Good job, keep it up!

WHAT_NO_MONEY
WHAT_NO_MONEYLv13WHAT_NO_MONEY

thanks for the chapter

Joshua_Iyanuloluwa
Joshua_IyanuloluwaLv1Joshua_Iyanuloluwa

Beautiful. I was engrossed from the start. The prologue didn’t really catch my fancy, but the first chapter got me hooked. Interactions seemed smooth and I felt like I could connect with the characters. I hope the story is this consistent in quality. Cheers.

TyrTheFallen
TyrTheFallenLv12TyrTheFallen

Why is it that most apocalypse stories start with everyone falling unconscious the Resident Evil start is much better having a zombie or some kind of mutated creature suddenly attacking the MC.

Everything_Forever
Everything_ForeverLv13Everything_Forever

Thanks for the chap!

Durandahl
DurandahlLv4Durandahl

you switched since for sense and groan for grown

Nickjr321
Nickjr321Lv14Nickjr321

Thx

George_Vasiliu
George_VasiliuLv3George_Vasiliu

thanks for the chapter

Bima_Mahendra
Bima_MahendraLv15Bima_Mahendra

I hope Aldrian make it to Japan before this happens. Because it's almost impossible to survive a plane crash like that.