Gravedagger
You know, it's ironic that an editor would name themselves "King of Mortal". Pretty much says their (lack of) skill level in their name.
Honestly, if this is helping, I shudder to think what state the unedited text was in. I mean, we're talking several grammar and/or sentence structure errors per sentence here.
Gravedagger:be nice man, he's helping a lot for free.