MizA
You’re a great writer. I listened somewhere that one of the most effective ways to keep your audience is to let them in on secrets that your story’s characters aren’t aware of… allowing the audience to know what’s going to happen right before it happens. You do this superbly well. I’ve added several in-chapter comments regarding my predictions and within the next few chapters you reveal the answer. It’s like you’re reading my mind and anticipating everything I want. Thank you.