k personally think these realistic scenes make it better lol, it helps immerse yourself in the world, plus not adding stuff like this would be a bit too forced.
I also love the details you add. I feel real discomfort and revolt against these characters due to it and makes the story that much more real and that much better. Having such a strong influence on their emotion, is a testament to you’re own writing skills.
Also if your release rate is gonna be so on and off brother ark you should probably lower your privilege costs since it is unlikely that most people would be willing to go past level 1 privilege
Ark a good way to maybe accommodate those Who might not like auch scences in your story is to put a little disclaimer At the start of such chapters letting people know before they go to read the chapter that it contains Such themes
Don't worry Ark, this arc (pun intended) is amazingly realistic and makes us (reader) feel strong emotions which is why I personally read stories. So keep it up!
I think most readers really enjoyed the things you did. It makes us really angry with this immorality and stuff. Also, the characters are alive and have feelings. Kyle's recklessness to save his sister. It really pokes my heart and makes me enrage.